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jahnocli
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  03:58:22 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Well, here it is:
https://vimeo.com/45608112

All I can see are the numerous problems. The original format was 720 x 400 (16:10), but having lashed it together in Movie Maker it's squashed it up into some anamorphic aberration! By the way, do I send the original movie file to you, Mike? In the meantime, crits welcome...
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Wena
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  07:53:24 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Jahnoci that was absolutely hilarious, a very professional job, the art work and dialog was great. I think the characters are exalent.

If there is any problem it was mine, the dialog was too fast for me as a Welsh person to read. But it was good for me that it was in the format it was as I was able to stop the film for me to catch up.

By the way, the last word, “Dumbass” what dos it mean?

Wena
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jahnocli
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  07:59:03 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I have it on good authority that 'dumbass' (or 'dumb ass') is an American insult! Thanks for the kind words. Yes, there are some timing issues, as you discovered. I decided to ignore them and just get it out there, or I would never let it go! As my dear old mum used to say, the trouble with perfectionists is they never finish anything.
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Kelleytoons
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  1:08:03 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Here's the story so far:

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neeters_guy
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  6:33:17 PM  Show Profile  Visit neeters_guy's Homepage  Reply with Quote
That was funny and a tad surreal. Wilma's parting shot seems bipolar in this exchange. She might be up to something?

So Joe's van is filled with prisoners and now he's off to fix the plumbing on Steve Wells's Time Machine... What's to come of this?


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http://neetersguy.tumblr.com/
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sbtamu
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Posted - 07/12/2012 :  8:37:44 PM  Show Profile  Visit sbtamu's Homepage  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by neeters_guy

That was funny and a tad surreal. Wilma's parting shot seems bipolar in this exchange. She might be up to something?

So Joe's van is filled with prisoners and now he's off to fix the plumbing on Steve Wells's Time Machine... What's to come of this?


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http://neetersguy.tumblr.com/

IDK but I have a feeling I'm next.


http://www.youtube.com/user/sbtamu
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Wena
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Posted - 07/14/2012 :  10:55:00 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I have lost track on this thread, I understand that a pluming job is coming up on a time travel machine, cant find the thread.

Wena

Edited by - Wena on 07/14/2012 10:55:52 AM
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jahnocli
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Posted - 07/15/2012 :  06:23:28 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by neeters_guy
That was funny and a tad surreal. Wilma's parting shot seems bipolar in this exchange. She might be up to something?

So Joe's van is filled with prisoners and now he's off to fix the plumbing on Steve Wells's Time Machine... What's to come of this?


Yes, I wanted the ending to have a bit of 'edge'. I hoped it looked like Joe was being manipulated!

quote:
Originally posted by Wena

I have lost track on this thread, I understand that a pluming job is coming up on a time travel machine, cant find the thread.

Wena


Wena, you have to keep playing the "story so far". Even then it's difficult! Good luck, sbtamu!

Edited by - jahnocli on 07/15/2012 06:29:32 AM
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Wena
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Posted - 07/15/2012 :  06:45:11 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
So, can I take the next step, but is sbtamu suggesting above that he would like to do it?

I find I have an asset from another job I have been doing, and a story to advance the present one.

Mike, how about it.

Wena
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sbtamu
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Posted - 07/15/2012 :  12:04:47 PM  Show Profile  Visit sbtamu's Homepage  Reply with Quote
If you are ready Wena, go ahead and I'll do the one after yours.

http://www.youtube.com/user/sbtamu
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Kelleytoons
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Posted - 07/15/2012 :  12:14:10 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I think you've been given the lead here, Wena (with sbtamu following).

Cool -- we have people queued up now <g>.
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Wena
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Posted - 07/27/2012 :  4:26:42 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Sorry I have been so long poor old Joe was a gin pig for space travel.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/53724979/Park%202.mov

I have had a lot of problems with this one and had to rush it.

I have a big job to do, and there is some money in it.
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Kelleytoons
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Posted - 07/27/2012 :  5:36:05 PM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Hey, money jobs ALWAYS take precedence.
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videodv
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Posted - 08/02/2012 :  10:24:52 AM  Show Profile  Visit videodv's Homepage  Reply with Quote
I think all the contributions so far are great, really like the way this is going.

Will contribute myself when others have finished there own parts.

Let me know when it's my turn and I will have another go.

Regards
Chris.
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Wena
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Posted - 08/02/2012 :  10:51:07 AM  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I had meant to correct you Mike, money dose not take precedence with me, but then I need to have it. Have you noticed that I did send my peace?
There is a lot more I needed to put in, for example there is no eye blinks and the movement is very poor. However, I thing I have improved on the voices.

Now it is sbtamu turn, I think?

Wena

Edited by - Wena on 08/02/2012 3:24:24 PM
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